The TWO phrases that should be revised to maintain formal language and style are:
B. messed-up old railroad track
E. yummy snacks you can buy
Revising these phrases would enhance the overall formality of the paragraph.
A student has written an informational paragraph and wants to revise it to make sure it maintains formal language and style. Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows. Tourists and residents in New York City are discovering a surprising garden walk located 30 feet above the bustle of the street. Open since 2009, it is called the High Line, and it attracts millions of visitors every year. A group of people raised money to turn the messed-up old railroad track into a tree-lined pedestrian pathway. If walkers get hungry along the way, there are yummy snacks you can buy. The High Line also features a variety of sculptures and other works of art. Select the TWO phrases that should be revised. A. sculptures and other works of art B. messed-up old railroad track C. Tourists and residents in New York City D. it attracts millions of visitors every year E. yummy snacks you can buy F. tree-lined pedestrian pathway
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