Question
The topic sentence below is...
In this part of my essay, I will write about how hard it is for parents to limit the time their children spend on the internet.
Strong: Claim
Weak: Not a Claim
In this part of my essay, I will write about how hard it is for parents to limit the time their children spend on the internet.
Strong: Claim
Weak: Not a Claim
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The topic sentence you provided is a **weak** statement. While it indicates what the essay will discuss, it does not present a clear argument or claim about the difficulties parents face in limiting internet time. A stronger topic sentence would assert a specific viewpoint or argument related to that difficulty, making a clear claim rather than just stating the intention to write about a topic. For example, a stronger version might be: "Parents struggle significantly to impose limits on their children's internet usage due to the pervasive nature of technology in daily life."