Question
Read this student's rough draft.
I learned the game of chess under the wise tutelage of my Uncle Ray. He's a chess master, and he dominates the West-Side Park tournaments each spring. Uncle Ray explained bishops, rooks, and pawns for me as my parents were teaching me my alphabet. I learned how to protect my queen as my peers learned to ride bicycles. Ray instructed me daily on chess theory and end-game strategy.
Which concluding sentence best reflects the writer's voice?
He taught me about chess legend Garry Kasparov, and together we dissected his games.
I like chess because it’s super fun, and someday I’ll beat my uncle at his own game.
He is a fantastic teacher, and he has the skills to crush the competition in any tourney.
The next local tournament is being sponsored by the Rotary club, and the entry fee is ten dollars.
I learned the game of chess under the wise tutelage of my Uncle Ray. He's a chess master, and he dominates the West-Side Park tournaments each spring. Uncle Ray explained bishops, rooks, and pawns for me as my parents were teaching me my alphabet. I learned how to protect my queen as my peers learned to ride bicycles. Ray instructed me daily on chess theory and end-game strategy.
Which concluding sentence best reflects the writer's voice?
He taught me about chess legend Garry Kasparov, and together we dissected his games.
I like chess because it’s super fun, and someday I’ll beat my uncle at his own game.
He is a fantastic teacher, and he has the skills to crush the competition in any tourney.
The next local tournament is being sponsored by the Rotary club, and the entry fee is ten dollars.
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The concluding sentence that best reflects the writer's voice is:
"I like chess because it’s super fun, and someday I’ll beat my uncle at his own game."
This sentence captures a personal sentiment and ambition, connecting the writer's experiences with their Uncle Ray to their own goals, which aligns well with the reflective tone established in the rough draft.
"I like chess because it’s super fun, and someday I’ll beat my uncle at his own game."
This sentence captures a personal sentiment and ambition, connecting the writer's experiences with their Uncle Ray to their own goals, which aligns well with the reflective tone established in the rough draft.