Question
You are revising an informative paragraph comparing the sun and the moon. You have written the following sentences:
One difference between the moon and the sun is their size. The sun is much larger than Earth. The moon is smaller than Earth.
Which revision correctly combines the sentences?
One difference between the moon and the sun is their size. The sun is much larger than Earth, while the moon is smaller than Earth.
One difference between the moon and the sun is their size. The sun is much larger than Earth, while. The moon is smaller than Earth.
One difference between the moon and the sun is their size, the sun is much larger than Earth, while the moon is smaller than Earth.
One difference between the moon and the sun is their size. The sun is much larger than Earth. The moon is smaller than Earth.
Which revision correctly combines the sentences?
One difference between the moon and the sun is their size. The sun is much larger than Earth, while the moon is smaller than Earth.
One difference between the moon and the sun is their size. The sun is much larger than Earth, while. The moon is smaller than Earth.
One difference between the moon and the sun is their size, the sun is much larger than Earth, while the moon is smaller than Earth.
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The correct revision that combines the sentences effectively is:
**One difference between the moon and the sun is their size. The sun is much larger than Earth, while the moon is smaller than Earth.**
This version connects the ideas clearly and uses proper punctuation.
**One difference between the moon and the sun is their size. The sun is much larger than Earth, while the moon is smaller than Earth.**
This version connects the ideas clearly and uses proper punctuation.
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