Question
You are revising an informative paragraph about entrepreneurs, people who start their own businesses. You have written a possible run-on sentence:
Entrepreneurs start their own businesses for example, Walt Disney made cartoons, movies, and Disneyland.
Which revision corrects the run-on sentence?
Entrepreneurs start their own businesses for example Walt Disney made cartoons, movies, and Disneyland.
Entrepreneurs start their own businesses. For example, Walt Disney made cartoons, movies, and Disneyland.
No correction is needed; this is not a run-on sentence.
Entrepreneurs start their own businesses for example, Walt Disney made cartoons, movies, and Disneyland.
Which revision corrects the run-on sentence?
Entrepreneurs start their own businesses for example Walt Disney made cartoons, movies, and Disneyland.
Entrepreneurs start their own businesses. For example, Walt Disney made cartoons, movies, and Disneyland.
No correction is needed; this is not a run-on sentence.
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The correct revision that addresses the run-on sentence is:
**Entrepreneurs start their own businesses. For example, Walt Disney made cartoons, movies, and Disneyland.**
**Entrepreneurs start their own businesses. For example, Walt Disney made cartoons, movies, and Disneyland.**
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