Asked by amber jo
Thesis statement
Each day our children go to school to learn, only instead find violence.
Each day our children go to school to learn, only instead find violence.
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Ms. Sue
This is not an acceptable thesis statement.
It's too general.
What is violence?
Where is your opinion?
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It's too general.
What is violence?
Where is your opinion?
Please carefully read the comments of Writeacher and Bobpursley. Be sure to study the website Writeacher posted.
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