Question

Do you need to make it longer or is it time to tie it together?

As someone who moved to the exact opposite - from the suburbs of Cincinnati to a crappy, noise-filled small town in Taiwan where people can't drive, I understood this completely and loved the essay.

I think somehow tying it together and finishging it up would be perfect at this point unless you're required to write more in your essay.

Matt




To answer your question, i do have to write more. and after that paragraph is my conlcusion which is below:

Prior to my arrival to America, I thought life here was going to be hard to adjust and I was right. The environment was too quiet and empty, learning to speak English was difficult, and getting used to going to school was a challenge. However, I overcame the obstacles by giving life here a second chance and I saw myself enjoying living in this country. One of the lessons I learned was not to judge too quickly before trying out new things. This experience helped me change into a confident and responsible young adult who loves living in the United States of America.

Answer 1

Prior to my arrival to America, I thought life here was going to be hard to adjust and I was right. The environment was too quiet and empty, learning to speak English was difficult, and getting used to going to school was a challenge. However, I overcame the obstacles by giving life here a second chance and I saw myself enjoying living in this country. One of the lessons I learned was not to judge too quickly before trying out new things. This experience helped me change into a confident and responsible young adult who loves living in the United States of America.

Answer 2

Prior to my arrival to America, I thought life here was going to be hard to adjust and I was right. The environment was too quiet and empty, learning to speak English was difficult, and getting used to going to school was a challenge. However, I overcame the obstacles by giving life here a second chance and I saw myself enjoying living in this country. One of the lessons I learned was not to judge too quickly before trying out new things. This experience helped me change into a confident and responsible young adult who loves living in the United States of America.