The best option to introduce a simile and make the description more vivid is:
add “as thick as syrup” after “a moment of silence.”
This simile enhances the imagery of the silence, making it feel more tangible and heavy.
There was a moment of silence. Everyone seemed unsure whether to laugh or take the announcement seriously. If what they’d said over the loudspeaker was true, everything was about to change.
Which revision would introduce a simile to make the description more vivid?
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add “that lasted ages” after “silence”
add “that lasted ages” after “silence”
add “intense” after “a moment of”
add “intense” after “a moment of”
add “hysterically” after “laugh”
add “hysterically” after “laugh”
add “as thick as syrup” after “a moment of silence”
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