Question
There was a moment of silence. Everyone seemed unsure whether to laugh or take the announcement seriously. If what they’d said over the loudspeaker was true, everything was about to change.
Which revision would introduce a simile to make the description more vivid?
(1 point)
Responses
add “hysterically” after “laugh”
add “hysterically” after “laugh”
add “intense” after “a moment of”
add “intense” after “a moment of”
add “that lasted ages” after “silence”
add “that lasted ages” after “silence”
add “as thick as syrup” after “a moment of silence”
Which revision would introduce a simile to make the description more vivid?
(1 point)
Responses
add “hysterically” after “laugh”
add “hysterically” after “laugh”
add “intense” after “a moment of”
add “intense” after “a moment of”
add “that lasted ages” after “silence”
add “that lasted ages” after “silence”
add “as thick as syrup” after “a moment of silence”
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The best revision to introduce a simile and make the description more vivid would be:
**add “as thick as syrup” after “a moment of silence.”**
This simile creates a more visual and tangible image of the moment of silence, enhancing the overall description.
**add “as thick as syrup” after “a moment of silence.”**
This simile creates a more visual and tangible image of the moment of silence, enhancing the overall description.