The music played so loud I knew my ears would be ringing for hours. The band rocked. We thumped our feet to the beat and shouted along with the lyrics.
Which revision would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid?
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replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
replace “rocked” with “was on fire”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “at the top of our lungs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
add “like maniacs” after “shouted”
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life”
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The best revision that would introduce hyperbole to make the description more vivid is:
replace “hours” with “the rest of my life.”
This change amplifies the intensity of the noise and the impact it has on the speaker, creating a more exaggerated effect.
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