Which sentence uses commas to correctly separate items in a series?

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Jerry filled his backpack with a change of clothes, a flashlight his sleeping bag, snacks and water for his hike in the mountains.
Jerry filled his backpack with a change of clothes, a flashlight his sleeping bag, snacks and water for his hike in the mountains.

Ashley packed a bathing suit and wrap, sunscreen, sun hat, sandals, and a good mystery book for her day at the beach.
Ashley packed a bathing suit and wrap, sunscreen, sun hat, sandals, and a good mystery book for her day at the beach.

Douglas packed his suitcase for the audition, with two pairs of pants, four shirts, several pairs of socks and his trumpet.
Douglas packed his suitcase for the audition, with two pairs of pants, four shirts, several pairs of socks and his trumpet.

Kiera loaded up her bag with her camera, two different lenses, and extra rolls of film, for her nature photography class.

1 answer

The sentence that uses commas to correctly separate items in a series is:

Ashley packed a bathing suit and wrap, sunscreen, sun hat, sandals, and a good mystery book for her day at the beach.

This sentence correctly uses commas to separate the list of items being packed. The other sentences have issues with comma placement.