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What would be a good thesis statement on steroids ?

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Ms. Sue
Yikes!

What do you want to say about steroids?

Steroids are life-savers for many people with serious illnesses. Steroids are also abused by a few athletes.

Raina
Well I do not want to be bias because of exactly what you said on how it can cure serious illnesses and I'm trying to say that more information is needed before banning steroids because this decision can make or break someones life...


How would I sum it up ?
Ms. Sue
Are you opposed to illegal or unauthorized use of steroids?

Read through several of these sites may help you clarify your ideas.

Ms. Sue
http://www.google.com/search?source=ig&hl=en&rlz=1G1GGLQ_ENUS374&q=steroid+use

Raina
I am opposed to it unless it will be aiding in helping someone in a critical situation .
Raina
How do this sound ?

Steroids are life-savers for many people with serious illnesses and banning them can ruin one who is dependent upon it.
Ms. Sue
The only plans to ban steroids is for people who are involved in competitive sports. I don't think anyone has proposed banning steroid use for everyone.

Please read those websites I posted.

Raina
I believe there is more emphasis on the mental effects of steroid use then the psychological effects.
Ms. Sue
Where are you going with this thesis?

Raina
I meant mental vs. physical
Ms. Sue
Who is putting more emphasis upon mental than physical use of steroids?

Doctors keep prescribing steroids for the patients who need them.

You probably want to focus on the illegitimate use of steroids in athletics.

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