Asked by Jasmine
I'm not sure about my answers . The directions state rewrite the following sentece, focusing on the grammar and rule are . If the sentence is already correct write no change. Can you help me correct them please.
The grammar rule is for sentences 1 & 2:
Inclusive Language-Quoting from Biased Sources.
(1)The sentence is:
The law form the 1800's mandated that men could buy alcohol and cigarettes only from a state store.
My answer:
No change
(2)The sentence is:
The employee guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
My answer:
The men's guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
Inclusive Language-Quoting from Biased Sources.
(1)The sentence is:
The law <b>from</b> the 1800's mandated that men could buy alcohol and cigarettes only from a state store.
My answer:
No change <b>Since the sentence is about the 1800's, you are correct. Men's and women's equality did not exist then.</b>
(2)The sentence is:
The employee guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
My answer:
The men's guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan. <b>Change "men" to "employees" and you'll be all set.</b>
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Iposted a new question but its actually for you responce to your answer i need to correct a grammar question to this in the rule it states something about (sic) where am i suppost to add it for the two questions
The grammar rule is for sentences 1 & 2:
Inclusive Language-Quoting from Biased Sources.
(1)The sentence is:
The law form the 1800's mandated that men could buy alcohol and cigarettes only from a state store.
My answer:
No change
(2)The sentence is:
The employee guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
My answer:
The men's guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
Inclusive Language-Quoting from Biased Sources.
(1)The sentence is:
The law <b>from</b> the 1800's mandated that men could buy alcohol and cigarettes only from a state store.
My answer:
No change <b>Since the sentence is about the 1800's, you are correct. Men's and women's equality did not exist then.</b>
(2)The sentence is:
The employee guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.
My answer:
The men's guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan. <b>Change "men" to "employees" and you'll be all set.</b>
=)
Iposted a new question but its actually for you responce to your answer i need to correct a grammar question to this in the rule it states something about (sic) where am i suppost to add it for the two questions
Answers
Answered by
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Jo123 In this sentence you are sanyig TWO separate things: 1) This is the only guide book recommended, and 2) it was useful. Because these are SEPARATE statements, you need to link them with and'. Otherwise the sentence does not make sense. I hope this was helpful!
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I have nothing to say
On the contrary