There are two pronouns that don't agree with their antecedent.
Do you see it?
Note: it would be easier to change the number of the antecedent.
revising sentences to remove these pronouns When a police officer fires his gun, he mustfill out a lot of paperwork. When a teacher writes an exam, they think about what aspects of students learning they want
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My comments: How dare you refer to a gun as he, everyone knows guns are she.
And, of course, exams do think about students.
And, of course, exams do think about students.
You're in rare form, Bob. <g>