Question

revising sentences to remove these pronouns When a police officer fires his gun, he mustfill out a lot of paperwork. When a teacher writes an exam, they think about what aspects of students learning they want

Answer 1

There are two pronouns that don't agree with their antecedent.

Do you see it?

Note: it would be easier to change the number of the antecedent.

Answer 2

My comments: How dare you refer to a gun as he, everyone knows guns are she.

And, of course, exams do think about students.

Answer 3

You're in rare form, Bob. <g>