which sentence requires revision to maintain a formal style?

Question

-quaker's like william pen wouldn't play taxes to support wars because they were against it, and this made people angry.

-the duke of york was good friends with william penn, and he signed a charter granting an expansive territory that became known as pennsylvania

-william penn used his considerable wreath to assist his fellow quakers in england, where they often faced persecution for their beliefs.

-born into a distinguished family, william penn joined the religious society of friend, or quakers, at the age of 22

Answer 1

The sentence that requires revision to maintain a formal style is:

• "quaker's like william pen wouldn't play taxes to support wars because they were against it, and this made people angry."

Revised version: "Quakers, such as William Penn, refused to pay taxes to support wars due to their opposition to such conflicts, which resulted in discontent among some individuals."