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  2. How is local revision different from global revision? A. Local revision is on a smaller, sentence-level scale.  B. Local
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  3. A researcher finds that their data contradicts their initial hypothesis. What does this necessarily mean?(1 point)Responses The
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  4. A researcher finds that their data contradicts their initial hypothesis. What does this necessarily mean?(1 point) Responses The
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  5. Read the personal narrative passages and select the best answers. You must score 3/5 points to pass.1) Decide if the above
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  6. What sentence requires revision to maintain a formal style? Choose one correct answer.1. Born into a distinguished family,
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  7. What sentence requires revision to maintain a formal style? (1 point)William Penn used his considerable wealth to assist his
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  8. which sentence requires revision to maintain a formal style?-quaker's like william pen wouldn't play taxes to support wars
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  9. The race began modestly, in 1970, with only 110 people in the race.This revision combines sentences (4) and (5) in paragraph 3.
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  10. What sentence requires revision to maintain a formal style?a. Quakers like William Penn wouldn't pay taxes to support wars
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