Question

She got home from school. She opened the refrigerator and took out a snack. She got a plate. She sat at the table. She ate.
How could the author improve the syntax of this passage?

(1 point)
Responses

by shortening the length of each sentence
by shortening the length of each sentence

by varying the beginning word of each sentence
by varying the beginning word of each sentence

by using semicolons in place of periods
by using semicolons in place of periods

by eliminating the final sentence.

Answer 1

The author could improve the syntax of this passage **by varying the beginning word of each sentence.** This would create a more engaging and fluid reading experience.