Question
Use the paragraph to answer the question.
She got home from school. She opened the refrigerator and took out a snack. She got a plate. She sat at the table. She ate.
How could the author improve the syntax of this passage?
(1 point)
Responses
by using semicolons in place of periods
by using semicolons in place of periods
by shortening the length of each sentence
by shortening the length of each sentence
by varying the beginning word of each sentence
by varying the beginning word of each sentence
by eliminating the final sentence.
She got home from school. She opened the refrigerator and took out a snack. She got a plate. She sat at the table. She ate.
How could the author improve the syntax of this passage?
(1 point)
Responses
by using semicolons in place of periods
by using semicolons in place of periods
by shortening the length of each sentence
by shortening the length of each sentence
by varying the beginning word of each sentence
by varying the beginning word of each sentence
by eliminating the final sentence.
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The author could improve the syntax of this passage **by using semicolons in place of periods**. This would help to combine related actions and create a more fluid and cohesive narrative.