Question

I need help with making a thesis for a paper on preventing teens from becoming teen parents.

Answer 1

These are the two best webpages I've seen on how to write GOOD thesis statements.

http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/06/21/5-tips-on-how-to-write-a-strong-thesis-statement/

and

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Remember that your thesis statement needs to include your topic and your opinion (your position, your stance) about that topic ... what you intend to <b>prove</b> by the end of your paper.

You'll also need to narrow your topic; what you stated above is too broad for a paper. (People write whole books on your topic!!)
http://web.uvic.ca/wguide/Pages/EssayNarrowTopics.html
and
http://homeworktips.about.com/od/paperassignments/a/narrow.htm

Please post a draft of your thesis statement after you have read all these linked webpages.

Answer 2

Be sure to read this over, too:
http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/07/07/the-differences-between-college-writing-and-high-school-writing/

Answer 3

Thank you but that didn't help me much.