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hi i had to write a paper on print media and i sent my paper though writepoint and it said that this phrase of my paper was to wordiness and consider revising nothing inappropriate so what else could i say thank you
Without seeing that paper, how would we know how to help you?

Sra
Sra is right. Without seeing the paper itself, there's no way anyone here can know.

Read through this, make corrections, and then post your corrected paper:

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm

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