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Essay Question: Look at the Protagonist's motivators and then look at the antagonists motivators. Are their motives similar at all? Do these characters react differently to intrinsic or extrinsic motivators?
The story is cranes by Hwang Sun- Won. My story doesn’t have the commander in it, so I need another antagonist. Can you please help?
I need a Topic Sentence for the essay question above with the Claim/Reason #1 :

(Topic sentences should address a SPECIFIC ASPECT OF YOUR THESIS. Does your topic sentence read like PLOT SUMMARY? If so, change it.)

I need a sentence that Explains the idea further, but in your own words - paraphrase in one to three sentences. This will be used later when we put all of the sentences together in one paragraph. So please make it good.

Sentences with Textual Evidence to support the claim above.

Sentences with Analysis/Explanation of how textual evidence supports claim. This should be TWICE as long as your Textual Evidence and Examples.

I also need to Connect the information in this paragraph to the thesis statement in one or two sentences.

Body Paragraph #1 (all put together) Copy and paste all sentences above into one paragraph. This whole paragraph will be put into your essay.