Question

Directions: Rewrite each of the following sentences by adding at least THREE (3) descriptive details. Think about the who, what, when, where, and why. Don’t forget sensory details (sight, sounds, touch, smell, and taste). Each sentence should be AT LEAST ten (10) words long.

11. My friend and I ate soup.

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12. Anna took her dog on a walk.
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13. Lucas cleaned his room.

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14. Abigail helped her mom bake a cake.

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Answer 1

11. My friend and I sat by the warm fireplace, savoring the savory aroma of homemade chicken noodle soup on a chilly November evening.

12. Anna strolled through the vibrant park under the golden afternoon sun, feeling her fluffy, wagging dog's leash gently tug against her hand.

13. Lucas meticulously organized his cluttered room, wiping down dusty shelves and rearranging his collection of action figures on a quiet Sunday morning.

14. Abigail cheerfully sifted flour as she watched her mom expertly mix vanilla extract into the velvety cake batter, the sweet scent of freshly baked desserts filling the cozy kitchen.