Question

Write an account of the death from Griggs point of view. This is another question from the primary source about the little child who died in the chimney.

I am too speechless to utter a word. I am left with a burning heart and a mind useless to think. Today wasn't my day, I have realized how low my class is, and what a worthless for nothing man I am. Today, because of me an innocent child has been killed. How I wish, I had been careful and supported the young lad in his every small step.

Please tell me if this is good, and add or change messed up sentences around, thanks

Answer 1

This is good. Griggs is kinder than most businessmen of his time.

Answer 2

thank you