Question

Write an account of the climbing boy's experiences from his point of view. This is the same question from last day, which I have improved. Please tell me if I could add anything else in it to make it beter,thanks

I feel very weak. In this condition, I just can’t do much. My arms and legs are black-and-blue. I am partly injured everywhere. My only and last wish is to die today instead of tomorrow. I cannot live with these grievances and am ready to depart.

Answer 1

That's better. However, what about the pain from the burns?

Answer 2

You should also tell where the child is.

Answer 3

I feel very weak. In this condition, I just can’t do much. I am in the chimney sweep and I'm stuck. I cannot move and make my way through out of here. My arms and legs are black-and-blue. I am partly injured everywhere. It hurts to walk, sit, and I just feel Paralyzed. My only and last wish is to die today instead of tomorrow. I cannot live with these grievances and am ready to depart.

Is this better, please add anything else to make it better, thanks.

Answer 4

You ignored my question about the burns.

Answer 5

I feel very weak. In this condition, I just can’t do much. I am in the chimney sweep and I'm stuck. I cannot move and make my way through out of here. My arms and legs are black-and-blue. I am partly injured everywhere. I have burns on my legs and arms that ache and it just feels as if someone has dropped hot coal on them. It hurts to walk, sit, and I just feel Paralyzed. My only and last wish is to die today instead of tomorrow. I cannot live with these grievances and am ready to depart.

Answer 6

Sara, you don't seem to understand your source or your assignment.

Please go back and read both carefully. Then, start over again to do this assignment.

Answer 7

Okay, but can you tell me how I would start this off, because I tried to put myself in his shoes and speak about his experience. Also, could you please tell me what main details I have to include in this,thanks

Answer 8

You're stuck in a chimney. You're bruised, scraped and badly burned. You certainly can't walk.

Answer 9

thanks, I'll do this assignemnt on my own tonight, and post it on here tomorrow for you to check, thanks again Ms. Sue:-)