Please understand that no one here will do your work for you. However, we will be happy to read over whatever you come up with and make suggestions and/or corrections.
Please post what you write.
Here are a couple of webpages that will explain what the SAT people are looking for in essays and how they're graded:
http://blog.eprep.com/2006/11/09/how-your-sat-essay-is-scored/
http://blog.eprep.com/2006/12/04/sat-essay-rubric/
(You're aiming for a 6!!)
SAT Question-Are people too reluctant to change their opinions?
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After you have written the essay, we will be happy to make an evaluation and suggestions.