Asked by Jasmine/to Ms. Sue
                I have to write a paper on vases from Geometric to Orientalizing periods.(from ancient Greece).
So these are my Thesis Statements:
"My paper is about the representations of animals and humans form on the vases from the Geometric to Orieltalizing periods."
or
"My paper is about the representations of animals forms and funeral processions on the vases from the Geometric to Orieltalizing periods."
I am going to choose one but I am wondering if both of my thesis statements make sense.
Thanks
            
        So these are my Thesis Statements:
"My paper is about the representations of animals and humans form on the vases from the Geometric to Orieltalizing periods."
or
"My paper is about the representations of animals forms and funeral processions on the vases from the Geometric to Orieltalizing periods."
I am going to choose one but I am wondering if both of my thesis statements make sense.
Thanks
Answers
                    Answered by
            Ms. Sue
            
    Neither of those is a good thesis statement.
Your thesis statement should state the changes or evolution of these representations from the Geometric to the Orientalizing (note spelling) periods.
Please study these sites for how to prepare a good thesis statement.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
    
Your thesis statement should state the changes or evolution of these representations from the Geometric to the Orientalizing (note spelling) periods.
Please study these sites for how to prepare a good thesis statement.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
                    Answered by
            ana
            
    thanks for sites
    
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