Hello, I was wondering if you could read my essay and tell me what you think i could do to improve on it.

The problem is, I do not want to put it on the internet, so is there a way I can email you my essay?

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There's no way of sending any of us an email. I suggest you post your essay here or use one or both of the following to help you improve it.

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http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/proofing.htm