Question
We had a health checkup at school.
A doctor and two nurses came to our school. My hearing was good, and my eyes were not bad. I had two decayed teeth. There was a cavaty on each tooth. So I have to go to a dentist's to have the cavities filled in with amalgam or resin. The doctor said that I was in bad health. However, I had good news! I grew 5 cm from last year.
I don't need to wear glasses. Anyway, I will have to brush my teeth after eating.
(This is another version of the previous passage. Would you like to check the expressions? Thank you.)
A doctor and two nurses came to our school. My hearing was good, and my eyes were not bad. I had two decayed teeth. There was a cavaty on each tooth. So I have to go to a dentist's to have the cavities filled in with amalgam or resin. The doctor said that I was in bad health. However, I had good news! I grew 5 cm from last year.
I don't need to wear glasses. Anyway, I will have to brush my teeth after eating.
(This is another version of the previous passage. Would you like to check the expressions? Thank you.)
Answers
Writeacher
Good!!
Don't forget to check spelling -- "cavity." And in the sentence about growing 5 cm, you should replace "from" with "since."
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Don't forget to check spelling -- "cavity." And in the sentence about growing 5 cm, you should replace "from" with "since."
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PsyDAG
"dentist's" should not be possessive ("...go to a dentist to have...).