Question

Outline the achievement of Edward VI.

I have: Edward VI was Henry Tudor's and Jane Seymour's son who at a young age got crowned as king. At this young age he got placed under the control of a group of protestent regents. he developed strong Protestant sympathies and persecuted Catholics. He soon became ill and died at age 16. He gave away his throne to his Protestant cousin Jane Grey to keep mary away from snatching it


is this good?

Answer 1

Yes, it's good -- but be sure to capitalize Mary. Also, capitalize and spell Protestant correctly.

Can you find a more common word for "regents?"

Answer 2

Edward VI was Henry Tudor's and Jane Seymour's son who at a young age got crowned as king. At this young age he got placed under the control of a group of protestant rulers. He developed strong Protestant sympathies and persecuted Catholics. He soon became ill and died at age 16. He gave away his throne to his Protestant cousin Jane Grey to keep Mary away from snatching it.


is this good?

Answer 3

Great!