Asked by Elina

outline the achievement of Ignatius Loyola I have: Ignatius Loyola was a spanish soldier who organized the Society of Jesus - the Jesuits- to protect the church and spread Catholic message. He did this to stem Protestantism

please tell me if this is good and if I have to add more

thanx
Answered by Ms. Sue
This is good.

Obviously, much more could be said about Loyola, but the important thing is what your book says about him.

Does it mention that he was active in the Counter-Reformation movement? Does your book say that he was made a saint?

Also -- Spanish should be capitalized.

Do you know what "stem Protestantism" means?
Answered by Elina
no I don't know what it means
Answered by Ms. Sue
Look in this dictionary site at the second definition for the verb "stem."

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/stem
Answered by Elina
My book doesn't say anything about him being made a saint, and neither does it mention that he was active in the counter reformation movement. I posted all what it said in my book about him

if you can add to this then please do
:-)
Answered by Ms. Sue
Does your teacher want you to write more facts than are in your book?
Answered by Elina
well if he wanted to then he would have told us which he didn't
Answered by Ms. Sue
OK. Then you just need to understand what's in your book and put it in your own words.
Answered by Elina
ok but please do tell me if you like it or not, just to tell you one thing, sometimes I have trouble putting things in my own words, So if you can then could you help me put some things in my own words if I ever need to
Answered by Ms. Sue
When you put something in your own words, you can change the words around in the sentences. You should also use words you understand.
Answered by Elina
thanx do you like what i wrote though?
Answered by Elina
is this good enough ?
Answered by Ms. Sue
You need to write it in your own words.
Answered by Elina
Ignatius Loyola was a spanish soldier who set up the Society of Jesus - the Jesuits- to keep the church safe and distributed the Catholic message. He did this to originate Protestantism

is this good?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Oh, my goodness, no!

Please check the dictionary definition of "stem." It's the second definition.
Answered by Elina
Ignatius Loyola was a spanish soldier who set up the Society of Jesus - the Jesuits- to keep the church safe and distributed the Catholic message. He did this to stop Protestantism

oh sorry, I 1st thought it would be stop, but then I don't know whereri got lost

is this good?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Yay! This is very good now! :-)

But -- please -- capitalize Spanish.
Answered by Elina
okay thanx:-)