(21) Before they leave this festival, many visit the insect petting zoo. (22) Scientists believe some insects have been on Earth since prehistoric times. (23) Children line up for the opportunity to hold strange bugs of all kinds. (24) Most people agree that Purdue's Bug Bowl is definitely a one-of-a-kind experience!
1. What is the most effective way to improve the organization of the last paragraph (sentences 21-24)?
A. Delete sentence 21
B. Switch sentences 21 and 22
C. Delete sentence 22
D. Move sentence 24 to the beginning of the paragraph
I chose C
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I agree. That sentence has nothing to do with the paragraph about the petting zoo.
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