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I am having a really hard time coming up with an appropriate thesis statement on animal welfare, any ideas?

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This is one of the best webpages about how to write good thesis statements -- and what bad ones look like!

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Go through all of them, comparing the poor and revised thesis statements. Then you should have a better idea of how to write yours.

Please repost if you'd like feedback on what you come up with.

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