Question

When reviewing her draft Mara notices that not all of the sentences in her first body paragraph stay focused on its main point which large-scale revision technique would help her solve this problem a check the topic sentences be look for transitions or see include an explanation of evidence

Answer 1

A large-scale revision technique that would help Mara solve the problem of sentences in her first body paragraph not staying focused on its main point is to check the topic sentences, look for transitions, or include an explanation of evidence.