Can someone please over look my work and check for errors, I read over it and found nothing wrong, but I am sure there are things I am missing. Thank you
I believe that the question “Can we control our fate?” is difficult to answer when most of us do not know what our fate may be. But, putting that aside, my answer to the question is we as humans may be able to direct ourselves into a path leading to our fate, but not directly being the reason we ultimately end up with a certain fate. We can direct ourselves into our future due to the actions we make throughout our lives. And even though some decisions may seem minor at the time it can play an important part in one’s fate. Leading onto the concept of making decisions is the question “How much control do people really have over their own lives?” Although some things are bound to happen like natural disasters and other people's actions, in our everyday lives we are constantly making choices that affect our lives. This shows that we have an extreme amount of control in our own lives. However, different situations may have different restrictions on how much one can control their life. The summed up definition of destiny is events that are certain to happen in one's future, which will be the person's reason for living. I do believe it exists or at least in a way it does or what is the point of living? Everything that humans make has a reason for function so why wouldn’t God make us with a reason. Even though some people’s destiny may not be as great or impactful as others, the destiny every human should be to strive for the fulfillment of life.
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I believe that the question “Can we control our fate?” is difficult to answer BECAUSE most of us do not know what our fate may be. But, putting that aside, my answer to the question is we as humans may be able to direct ourselves into a path leading to our fate, but THAT MAY NOT BE the reason we ultimately end up with a certain fate. We can direct ourselves into our future BY the actions we TAKE throughout our lives. And .... though some decisions may seem minor at the time THEY can play an important part in one’s fate. Leading onto the concept of making decisions is the question “How much control do people really have over their own lives?” Although some things are bound to happen like natural disasters and other people's actions, in our everyday lives we are constantly making choices that affect our lives. This shows that we have an extreme amount of control OVER OUR own lives. However, different situations may RESTRICT how much one can control their life. ONES' DESTINY is DETERMINED BY events that are certain to happen in one's future, which will be the person's reason for living. I do believe it exists or at least in a way it does or what is the point of living? Everything that humans make has a reason for function so why wouldn’t God make us with a reason. Even though some people’s destiny may not be as great or impactful as others, the destiny every human should be to strive for IS the fulfillment of life.
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Better is this: into our future because of the actions we take throughout
These two seem to be contradictory:
"most of us do not know what our fate may be"
and
"may be able to direct ourselves into a path leading to our fate, but not directly being the reason we ultimately end up with a certain fate."
decisions … it <~~? a singular referring to a plural?
"Leading onto the concept of making decisions is the question"
~ "onto" needs to be to
~ need punctuation after "question"
Start a new paragraph with "Although"
These sentences are contradictory:
"This shows that we have an extreme amount of control in our own lives. However, different situations may have different restrictions on how much one can control their life."
Awkward phrasing:
"The summed up definition of destiny is events … "
What is "it" here?
"I do believe it exists or at least in a way it does or what is the point of living?"
Plural people have one destiny??
"some people’s destiny"