Asked by Sara123

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

I think it’s about time schools change their longtime traditional starting hours to accommodate teenagers’ well-being.
Answered by Ms. Sue
It's o.k., but I'd insert "that" between "time" and "schools."
Answered by Writeacher
Do you need to keep "I think"? Or is it clear that this is your opinion you're stating?
Answered by Writeacher
And I agree with Ms. Sue about adding "that" in the sentence.

Another question I have is whether you need to keep both "longtime" and "traditional" in there. Since they mean the same thing, take one out.
Answered by Ms. Sue
I agree with Writeacher's suggestions.
Answered by Sara123
Got it. thanks Ms. Sue and Writeacher!
yeah this is my opinion for a response on an article
Answered by Ms. Sue
You're welcome.
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