Proofreading...
The patient was being seen for an injured left ankle he suffered during a motorcycle accident (On a dirt race track, I believe.) This patient has a longstanding history of depression and has expressed thoughts of suicidal ideation [which seemed to peak about a year ago after his girlfriend died.]
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The patient was being seen for an injured left ankle he suffered during a motorcycle accident (on a dirt race track, I believe.) This patient has a longstanding (history of depression and has expressed thoughts of suicidal ideation) [which seemed to peak about a year ago after his girlfriend died.]
This patient is a 33-year-old female who states that she began to have problems with her balance approximately 8 years ago (her complaints began after a head trauma.) Her complaints consist of fatiguing easily after prolonged activity and losing her balance during ambulation easily. (she has been a distance runner for years)
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This patient is a 33-year-old female who states that she began to have problems with her balance approximately 8 years ago (her complaints began after a head trauma.) (Her complaints consist of fatiguing easily after prolonged activity and losing her balance) during ambulation easily. (She has been a distance runner for years.)
Im confuse can someone explain it to me?
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What directions have you been given? What are you supposed to do with these?
They want me to correct the paragraphs with parentheses or brackets inside of parentheses, but I don't understand it that well and I been going over it over a weeks or so.