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Is this poem good or bad?

What is love?
It's a special feeling
Deep inside our hearts
That is very reavling
What is love?
It's a special part of life
The two of each other together
Forever in each others lives
What is love?
It's in a shape of a heart
Caring for one another
Will never be apart
What is love?
Love means strength
Strength that is given to make it through to the end

2 answers

Check your spelling
reavling must be revealing?
"the two of each other?" Try a different expression
in each others lives = this is possessive and requires an apostrophe = each other's life
It's in a shape of a heart = It's in the shape, etc.

Otherwise the sentiment is lovely.

Sra
ok to lovy
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