My lawyer is so smart the trial ended 10 minutes after he started.

My lawyer is so smart he makes an owl look dumb.

He is so handsome that whoever looks at him faints.

He is so handsome that girls fell in love with him at first sight.

Okay, can someone check my hyperboles to see if they are correct?
Thank you.

2 answers

Personal opinion here!

The first, third, and fourth sound good and exaggerated. The second is rather blah.
I like the second one... It is funny and pokes fun at the "wise old owl" saying.

To make the first one really exaggerated, I would have said, 10 minutes BEFORE it started.

The last one is sort of old and too well used. What about - He is so handsome girls want to wear him to a fashion show.