Question

Hi, I am doing an assignment on transitions. I need some help. Here is what I have.

1. Care for a crispy, juicy grasshopper for breakfast? For example, in many parts of the world, it is considered perfectly acceptable to eat. I added for example.

2. People in North America is often shocked by the thought of eating bugs. For instance, grasshoppers, ants, and bees are considered treats by some people. I aded in for instance.
3. Even stinkbugs are eaten and enjoyed in some parts of the world. However, the glands contain a chemical called cyanide, which is poisonous. I added however.

4. In France, a frog's hind legs are very popular as food. Moreover, the hind legs are thought to be a delicacy in many French dishes..I aded moreover..

Is this correct?

Answer 1

I'm not sure exactly what you need from us. What you have written is true in different parts of the world. Grubs, for example, provide protein. I have eaten dried grasshoppers without knowing it; they were red and crunchy and no one told me until AFTER I had eaten them, what they were. In Russia, mice that had not yet opened their eyes were eaten (baked, I think) and cat and dog have been served as meat, plus horse meat is very popular in Holland.

Now, how exactly may we help you?

Sra

Answer 2

Oh, sorry..I guess I didn't explain myself clearly. My assignment is on Transitions. So, I added some transitions to sentences above..but I am not sure if they are correct or not..