Asked by symantha
ok so im supposed to create a poem about child abuse...and i have some good ones but i totally just got writers block and i need help..here is part of the poem, any suggestions
MY PAIN
it started with a pen and paper...
i write my emotions without thinking a bit
it happened so fat, did i even get hit?
i swear i did nothing wrong!
please help me god, help my parents to be gone
being abused hurts so bad, my inside and outside brused from my dad
what did i do to deserve this pain?
when i turned 10 my life spiraled down the drain
what heartless person hurts their child
and i cant find anything that rhymes with child!!! HELP ME PLZ PLZ
MY PAIN
it started with a pen and paper...
i write my emotions without thinking a bit
it happened so fat, did i even get hit?
i swear i did nothing wrong!
please help me god, help my parents to be gone
being abused hurts so bad, my inside and outside brused from my dad
what did i do to deserve this pain?
when i turned 10 my life spiraled down the drain
what heartless person hurts their child
and i cant find anything that rhymes with child!!! HELP ME PLZ PLZ
Answers
Answered by
autiana
have me dreaming dresms so wild
thats all i could think of
thats all i could think of
Answered by
autiana
but im just a child
only a soul filled with dreams of a day of freedom and bliss
and no memories of moments like this
only a soul filled with dreams of a day of freedom and bliss
and no memories of moments like this
Answered by
SraJMcGin
Be sure you spell everything correctly and use proper punctuation.
fat = fast
god = God
it = It and i = I
;help my parents = otherwise the comma will give you a run-on sentence; there are 2 separate sentences in that line.
brused = bruised
rhyming with child = dialed, filed, piled, riled, tiled, wild
This is a good start!
Sra
fat = fast
god = God
it = It and i = I
;help my parents = otherwise the comma will give you a run-on sentence; there are 2 separate sentences in that line.
brused = bruised
rhyming with child = dialed, filed, piled, riled, tiled, wild
This is a good start!
Sra
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