Asked by Sarah

All things considered, it seems reasonable to accept that injecting a small dosage of drugs in animals as it could help and improve of find cures for the
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Answered by Writeacher
This makes no sense.

Is there some punctuation missing and/or some excess words that need removing?
Answered by Sarah
All things considered, it seems reasonable to accept that injecting a small dosage of drugs in animals is acceptable as it could help and improve to find cures for the illnesses. How can I improve? what words shall I remove?
Answered by Writeacher
I'd omit "to accept" and "as" and "and improve to" and put a period after "acceptable." I'd change "it" to "This practice"

What do you get?
Answered by Sarah
I don't get it...
Answered by Writeacher
You don't get what? I told you exactly how to fix this sentence!

If you rewrite it all, as I told you above, I'll check it for you.
Answered by Sarah
All things considered, it seems reasonable to that injecting a small dosage of drugs in animals is acceptable as this practice could help to find cures for the illnesses
Answered by Writeacher
You followed some of my directions but not all.

Re-do.
Answered by Sarah
What do u mean by put a period after acceptable?
Answered by Writeacher
Exactly that. Make the first sentence stop there and start a new sentence.

Starting a new sentence will require some re-wording, which I've also told you how to do.
Answered by Sarah
All things considered, it seems reasonable to that injecting a small dosage of drugs in animals is acceptable. This practice could help to find cures for the illnesses.
Like so?
Answered by Writeacher
Almost!

Just remove "to" after "reasonable" and you'll be all set!

=)
Answered by Sarah
Thanks
Answered by Writeacher
You're welcome.
Answered by Sarah
what percentage of animal testing is successful
Answered by Sarah
I'm not against it...
Answered by Sarah
It's for my argumentative essay
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