I won't rewrite it for you. Study this and see what you can do.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/623/1
Hint: I think the insertion of one word would make the two clauses parallel.
How can I rewrite this sentence using parallel structure?
The stirring closing paragraph is the formal pronouncement of independence and borrowed from the resolution of independence adopted by congress July 2, 1776.
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