Asked by Larry
Rewrite this paragraph so that it is set in the future.
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The applications for this technology are far-reaching. The special system allows companies to track shipments. It also helps keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
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Help please, I know how to do past and present, but I'm having trouble with future.
thanks,
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The applications for this technology are far-reaching. The special system allows companies to track shipments. It also helps keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
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Help please, I know how to do past and present, but I'm having trouble with future.
thanks,
Answers
Answered by
Ms. Sue
I'll get you started --
The applications for this technology <b>will be</b> far-reaching. The special system allows companies to track shipments. It also helps keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
How would you change the other verbs?
The applications for this technology <b>will be</b> far-reaching. The special system allows companies to track shipments. It also helps keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
How would you change the other verbs?
Answered by
E.G.
The applications for this technology will be far-reaching.
The special system will allow companies to track shipments.
It also will help keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
The special system will allow companies to track shipments.
It also will help keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
Answered by
Larry
It also will help keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
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It doesn't like it makes sense, wouldn't,
"It will also help keep....."
Make more sense? Would that work tho?
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It doesn't like it makes sense, wouldn't,
"It will also help keep....."
Make more sense? Would that work tho?
Answered by
Ms. Sue
Yes, Larry, both make sense. The adverb, "also" can be used more than one place in a sentence.