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MEMORANDUM
To: Managers of Semper Absum Insurance
From: Walter smith
Date: October 29, 2008
Re: Increase Employees work efficiency

Effective from one week from today, all employees must have their one-hour lunchtime away from their desks. This new policy benefits the employees and the company together, by providing adequate time to all employees to enjoy their lunchtime and attend to personal matters.
This policy is a result of a report that was conducted by an efficiency expert which led us to believe that employees who worked through their lunch time tend to be less productive in the afternoon. The report concluded that if every employee had enough time to eat a proper meal and take care of their personal matters, then all their productivity would increase in the afternoon.
The CEO is in favour of this report and has a great faith in all of you to make sure this new Policy becomes a success.

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MEMORANDUM
To: Managers of Semper Absum Insurance
From: Walter smith
Date: October 29, 2008
Re: Increase Employees work efficiency

Effective from one week from today, all employees must have their one-hour lunchtime away from their desks. This new policy benefits the employees and the company together, by providing adequate time to all employees to enjoy their lunchtime and attend to personal matters.
This policy is a result of a report that was conducted by an efficiency expert which led us to believe that employees who worked through their lunch time tend to be less productive in the afternoon. The report concluded that if every employee had enough time to eat a proper meal and take care of their personal matters, then all their productivity would increase in the afternoon.
The CEO is in favour of this report and has a great faith in all of you to make sure this new Policy becomes a success.
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