Asked by helppppp


“That person must belong to a gang; just look how he dresses”. How often have we heard somebody mention these things, yet, how often have we said something similar?
how shall i start my opening i don't think this is good

Answered by Carpe_Diem
What is your topic about?
Answered by helppppp
stereotyping
Answered by Carpe_Diem
Okay your structure is great, and your concept is great, overall you are on the right track! However, when you say "how often have we heard someone mention these things" it sounds like you are only talking about that one specific phrase (the quote) maybe say something around the lines of "How often do you here people saying these types of things about others" (spiff that up a bit)

Do you understand?
Answered by helppppp
? kinda
Answered by helppppp
thank you
Answered by helppppp
like so
“That person must belong to a gang; just look how he dresses”. How often do you here people saying these types of things about others, yet, how often have we said something similar? I believe our society is based on the superficial things, which we categorize people because of the actions of a small percentage.
Answered by Carpe_Diem
Okay. LOL. Put it this way.
YOURS:“That person must belong to a gang; just look how he dresses”. How often have we heard somebody mention these things
This sounds like you are only talking about one specific thing. It sounds like your saying that we only here people saying the phrase “That person must belong to a gang; just look how he dresses”
MINE:"How often do you here people saying these types of things about others"
Notice I said TYPES, which makes it a general idea of what people might say. I am not signaling one thing out, but talking about EVERYTHING that is similar to the quote that people say

Does THAT make sense????
Answered by Carpe_Diem
YES EXACTLY. Now it is perfect. Great work! And you are very welcome.
Answered by Carpe_Diem
Good luck with your essay! I am sure you will do great!
Answered by helppppp
woah calm down that's what i did i cooreccted it what u told me before
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