Asked by Lyx
How would you fix this sentence?
The patient resides in a nursing home, which toppled over resulting in a broken hip.
The patient resides in a nursing home, which toppled over resulting in a broken hip.
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Answered by
bobpursley
I would remove the comma, assuming the nursing home actually toppled over. Odd nursing home,however, the patient was very lucky not to have been killed.
Now if it was the patient who toppled over and broke his hip, then
the patient, who toppled over and broke his hip, resides in a nursing home.
Now if it was the patient who toppled over and broke his hip, then
the patient, who toppled over and broke his hip, resides in a nursing home.
Answered by
Reed
Or:
"The patient, who resides in a nursing home, toppled over and broke his hip."
"The patient, who resides in a nursing home, toppled over and broke his hip."
Answered by
PsyDAG
The patient resides in a nursing home, which toppled over giving the patient a broken hip.
Answered by
Reed
Note: we both changed "which" to "who". Which refers to an object (as a building or a toaster), who refers to a person.
Answered by
Reed
PsyDAG, the comma is not necessary between "home" and "which". Otherwise, if the nursing home toppled over, that's a better way to put it. :)
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