Asked by Lucina
                In the novel, To Kill a Mockingbird  by Harper Lee,  a major character, Jem's view on the world shifts drastically due to his experiences with his hometown
Does this sentence sound awkward? If so, how can I make this sentence flow more smoothly?
Thank you
            
        Does this sentence sound awkward? If so, how can I make this sentence flow more smoothly?
Thank you
Answers
                    Answered by
            Reed
            
    It is a little awkward:  "...Harper Lee, a major character, Jem's..."  You might write "...Jem, drastically changes his view..."  And I would say Jem's experiences were IN his hometown, not with.
    
                    Answered by
            Lucina
            
    In the novel, To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee, a major character, Jem drastically changes his view due to his experiences in his hometown.
Thank you! Is this what you meant?
    
Thank you! Is this what you meant?
                    Answered by
            Reed
            
    you need a comma after "Jem,"  Jem is a noun, but it tells who the major character is.  The subject of your sentence is "a major character," a noun phrase.
    
                    Answered by
            Lucina
            
    Alright! Thanks for your help!
    
                    Answered by
            Reed
            
    You're welcome.
    
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