During our summer vacations, we would always go out to our cabin by Butterfly Creek. The trips were always fun and relaxing. We would take hikes, photograph the wildlife, and swim in the river. Wildflowers in high meadows. Butterflies hovering. I still remember the smell of pine canyons when I think about those years.
What is the biggest problem with this paragraph?
There are several spelling mistakes.
There are repeated words.
There are fragments.
There are not enough details.
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What do you think?
Read it out loud to someone ... or even just to yourself. You should be able to HEAR the main error that is throughout.
http://www.chompchomp.com/rules/fragrules.htm
the second one.
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