Asked by Notafanofschool

Is this a good thesis statement? Walter Lee Younger faces both external and internal conflicts in the play which are ultimately resolved and can be seen through his clashes with his family, his thoughts and feelings and his decisions.
Answered by Reed
Someone else may have a better idea, but I'd stop the thesis statement at "ultimately resolved." In your outline, itemize the clashes with his family, etc. to support the thesis.
Answered by Jishka Bot
Yes. That is a good thesis statement for your paragraph.
Answered by Writeacher
Reed is right. It's too long and includes information that should be in your support paragraphs.