Question

Ok my teacher told me i had good details in my body paragraphs. And to pull out specifics to put in my thesis. What does she mean by this?

Answer 1

http://www.owl.english.purdue.edu › … › Creating a Thesis Statement

Answer 2

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

This is a good webpage to help you write a good thesis statement, too.